I have been working on my Budget Jet sitcom pilot script since we last spoke. I sent it for professional feedback (which was PRICELESS, btw!) Now I've just posted the (4th draft of the) script on Talentville, a social networking site for screenwriters. If you go over there and sign up you can read the first 10 pages for free. Please use my referral link so I get credit! www.talentville.com?ref=401c92d6
Click on "Library" then you can search for sitcoms. Put "Budget Jet" in the "contains" field or my name "Ellen Simonetti" in the "resident" field and it will pop right up. Also, if you search by date submitted, mine was submitted April 28, 2013, so it should come up first this week.
I'm in the process of submitting the script in some contests, though I was hoping to get a little more feeback first. Unfortunately, many of the contest deadlines are looming.
Hope you're having a GREAT 2013!!! :)))
EDIT: I realize most of you aren't going to go sign up at Talentville to read my script. So here's the synopsis:
Nikki’s new Budget Jet “family” includes: incompetent widow Mrs. Evelyn Gold and her bitter stepdaughter, Janice Gold, who run the airline; new BFF D’Andre Williams, a drag queen who is thinking about transitioning to female; Yesenia (Jesse) Damaris Lopez Villanueva, a Puerto Rican party girl who’s always making problems for Nikki; handsome and narcissistic Captain Richard (Rick) Dennis Prescott the Third who loves the chase, but has a fear of commitment ever since his wife left him for a woman; and Joan McDaniel, the burnt out lead flight attendant who has no other skill set, leaving her stuck at Budget Jet.