Tuesday, December 23, 2008

"Queen of Sky" TV Pitch

Hello, All!

Happy Holidays!

For my holiday gift this year, could you please check out my TV pitch below and let me know what you think ...or if you have suggestions, even better!


Queen of Sky TV Series


Hook: An attractive new-hire flight attendant blogs her way through the ups and downs of her “glamorous” new lifestyle, including a string of dysfunctional relationships. (or Ally McBeal on a plane!)

Concept: Queen of Sky is a 30-minute dramedy about a new-hire flight attendant, Elena, who uses her blog to sort through her crazy life. The tone will be like Sex and the City or Ally McBeal with the occasional Scrubs-style fantasy. For example, when Elena does the safety demo for the first time, she imagines herself on a stage in the spotlight with her theme song playing. Elena has two new-hire roommates, a flamboyant Latin male and a Puerto Rican (or other ethnicity) princess. They start off in a “crash pad” for the first few episodes, but eventually share a one-bedroom apartment in Queens (halfway between LaGuardia and JFK). At the end of the pilot episode, Elena starts her blog and blog narration kicks in. The concept is based on my career-ending blog-turned-book, entitled Diary of a Dysfunctional Flight Attendant. My screen name on the blog was “Queen of Sky” and the blog was mostly written in third person. Elena, like me, is a Spanish-speaking gringa. Her Spanish is just good enough to qualify her as a language speaker and bad enough to cause a lot of misunderstandings and jumblings of the onboard announcements. She flies a mixture of international and domestic trips, but mostly to Latin America and Spain. Occasionally she gets to fly with one or both of her roommates, but normally she’s flying with catty, miserable women who are old enough to be her mother. Audiences will tune in each week to see where Elena will go next, what adventures she will have along the way, and whether she will ever manage to find a boyfriend that treats her with respect and doesn’t mind her being gone at least fifty percent of the time!

Central Conflict: The main conflict of the show is Elena’s continuous struggle to find balance in her life—particularly between her new job and her dysfunctional love life. She would really like a stable, functional relationship, but only seems to attract the opposite. Also, being a new-hire, she flies most weekends and holidays and often has to sit “reserve” (on-call duty), so she never knows where she’ll be next. Episodic conflicts include Elena’s constant conflicts with passengers, her roomies, coworkers, and Legacy Airlines management. For example, Elena and Ivette sometimes fight over their gay husband, Ricky, and Ricky sometimes brings home guys to their one-bedroom apartment without warning them in advance. And, of course, Elena is always getting into it with crazy/obnoxious passengers and coworkers. These conflicts will sometimes span several episodes.

Audience Demographics: 18- to 39-year-old females of all races; middle-aged white men who want to know what flight attendants are thinking; and gays and lesbians of all ages, races and classes. Two of the core cast are Latinos/ethnic and one is gay. There will be other recurring cast and guest stars of different races and sexual orientations.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

“When a subject is highly controversial... one cannot hope to tell the truth. One can only show how one came to hold whatever opinion one does hold. One can only give one's audience the chance of drawing their own conclusions as they observe the limitations, the prejudices, the idiosyncrasies of the speaker.”
~Virginia Woolf

Capitan Billy said...

I can only think of 3 popular type TV programs: Cops, Medical, Comic or a combo of any 2. A day (or nite) in the life of a flight attendant isn't going to hold my attention for very long without something dramatic or comic. Sexual might fly (no pun intended) on cable, but without something special it will be a hard sell for regular network.

Anonymous said...

It's Christmas Time Again
(by Bob Lazzar-Atwood)

Put your problems on probation
Run your troubles off the track,
Throw your worries out the window
Get the monkeys off your back.
Silence all your inner critics
With your conscience make amends,
And allow yourself some happiness
It's Christmas time again!

Call a truce with those who bother you
Let all the fighting cease,
Give your differences a breather
And declare a time of peace,
Don't let angry feelings taint
The precious time you have to spend,
And allow yourself some happiness
It's Christmas time again!

Like some cool refreshing water
Or a gentle summer breeze,
Like a fresh bouquet of flowers
Or the smell of autumn leaves,
It's a banquet for the spirit
Filled with family, food and friends,
So allow yourself some happiness
It's Christmas time again!

Merry Christmas QoS!

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LaTonya Bynum said...

I hope that you don't mind me being frank. I think the plot is boring. It does not appeal to a wide audience. You are missing a whole targeted audience "African Americans". I think you should make the 30 minute drama more like reality TV. It should include more about juggling life as a filght attendant, blogging, and family/friends. Add a black roomate and you might be on to something.

Let me know what you think of my ideas.

Sorry about what happened to you. Hope that all is well with you and yours!

Anonymous said...

woa, why black? what about indians???

ellen - the more colours you have in your tv show, the more viewers you'll get.

Anonymous said...

The Toast
by Virna Sheard

A toast to thee, 0 dear old year,
While the last moments fly,
A toast to thy sweet memory -
We'll lift the glasses high,
And bid to thee a fond farewell
As thou art passing by!

A toast to those who reaped success
In this good year of grace;
A toast to every one of them -
Come! Give the victors place!
Come, wish them well with right good will -
The winners in the race!

And one toast more! To those who failed
Wherever they may be;
With faces white they fought the fight,
But missed the victory;
So here's to them - the ones who strove -
On land and on the sea!

Fair dreams to thee, 0 grey old year,
Thy working time is done,
And gone for thee the silver moon,
And golden noon-day sun;
Yet sad old year - and glad old year -
We'll know no better one.

Anonymous said...

You may have a go at this Queen. I loved the show The Loop. It didn't last long, but was about a dysfunctional airline exec.

Everyone hates the airlines yet they pulled off 17 or so episodes. I say if they hanged you for supposed sexy pictures you might as well sex it up. Sex in the Sky. Jumpseat Jungle. A regular bunch of sexy cats purring around the world grabbing a Spanish soccer player one day, a pilot the next.

Hey, your old blog is gone gone gone. Poor journalspace. Smart move going to this site for your new one. Good Luck this year!

Anonymous said...

You may have a go at this Queen. I loved the show The Loop. It didn't last long, but was about a dysfunctional airline exec.

Everyone hates the airlines yet they pulled off 17 or so episodes. I say if they hanged you for supposed sexy pictures you might as well sex it up. Sex in the Sky. Jumpseat Jungle. A regular bunch of sexy cats purring around the world grabbing a Spanish soccer player one day, a pilot the next.

Hey, your old blog is gone gone gone. Poor journalspace. Smart move going to this site for your new one. Good Luck this year!

Anonymous said...

"An attractive new-hire flight attendant blogs her way through the ups and downs of her “glamorous” new lifestyle"?
I don't mean to hurt your feelings, but being a flight attendant is NOT glamorous. Honestly, I don't see your demo wanting to watch a show about a flight attendant, seems a little too 1980's and cheesy to me. Sorry.